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Germany X Reader- Cuddle (Quickie!)

    “Let’s cuddle, Luddy,” you said, tugging at your sexy German boyfriend’s shirt sleeve from where you sat beside him on the couch.

    Nein. I’m reading,” Ludwig answered, turning a page of his book.

    “Please?”

    Nein.”

    “Pretty please.”

    Neinnnn. Mein Gott, hov many times do I have to say zhat?” he said, his gaze flickering towards you in for a second.

    “Until you say yes,” you answered, huffing and crossing your arms over your chest. You puffed out your cheeks and looked away from him, with a cute pout.

    “... Let me finish zhis chapter, und zhen ve can cuddle,” he said, reading his book once more. You scowled, impatiently tapping your foot.

    “Pleassseeee! The book isn’t going anywhere!” you responded, turning back to him.

    “...Nein.”

    “You hesitated! You wanna cuddle with me, don’t you~?”

    “I do, but I want to finish zhis chapter more.”

    “Why does the book get your attention so much?”

    “Because I like it.”

    “Are you saying you like the book more than me?” you mockingly gasped melodramatically.

    Was?! Nein, of course not! You should knov that I love you more than life itself. Hov could you think zhat?”

    “I mean, you are paying more attention to that book,” you mumbled.

    He raised an eyebrow and chuckled, “You’re jealous of a book? I never zhought zhe day vould come."

    “I am not!”

    “Zhen let me finish zhis chapter,” he said, turning back to his book.

    “But I wanna cuddle!”

    “You’re so much like a child.”

    “But you love me, right?’

    “Of course. Ich liebe dich.”

    “Then cuddle with me.”

    Fein.” You blinked. You hadn’t actually thought that he would agree. But he did. Ludwig bookmarked his page and set it down on the table near.

    “YESSSSSSS!” you cheered and nearly glomped him.

    “Okay, okay, meine Liebe, beruhigen,” he said, using his mother language. You wrapped your slender arms around his torso and buried your head in his chest. He hummed a soothing German lullaby as he wrapped his arms around your waist and buried his head into your hair, inhaling your scent. You loved it when he hummed or chuckled, especially when you could feel it resounding in his chest.

    Within a few minutes, you two fell asleep in each other’s arms, blissfully unaware of the Gilbert’s soft ‘Kesesesese~’ sounding laughter as his footsteps receded down the hall and away from the lovers.

Edit 7/22/14- Wow, thanks for 80 favourites and over 800 views! :'D

I was bored and had to get my butt in gear, and usually, these little quick oneshots do it for me. :3 You'll probably see a lot of these floating around since once I'm done with something so long, I won't be doing much anymore. It's like my brain goes dead. XD
Anyways, enjoy those sexy German cuddles.
Did I get his personality right?
Oh, well, whatever.
First time writing Germany, it always goes bad. XD
Fun fact- Germany's actually my first favourite Hetalia character. Can't believe I haven't wrote about him, yet. XD

Translations [All are German, of course.]-
Nein- No
und- and
Mein Gott- My God
Was- What
Ich liebe dich- I love you
Fein- Fine
meine Liebe, beruhigen- my love, calm down.

Note- If you're wondering what lullaby he's humming, just find a popular and soothing German lullaby and there you go. I was too lazy to go off and find one. ^^;

Credits
Germany, Prussia © Hidekazu Himaruya [Is that the guy? Should be.]
You
© :iconsexygermanyplz:
Preview pic © original artist. (Snagged it off of fanpop. If you know the artist, please tell me and I shall give proper credits and link back to the original picture.)
Story © Yours truly, moi~!

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Also, please point out mistakes kindly. I want to correct my mistakes and such. It helps me a lot, since English isn't my best subject in school.
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It's not much, but I appreciate it greatly.


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Randomhetaliafan2 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
>//////<
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HJPLoverr Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015
this is adorable. i love it
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BethTX1010 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
x3 SO CUTE~!
I'll be reading your fics more often!
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Insanity-Kitsune Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  New member
Awe~! >////////w////////< so warm and fluffeh!!!!
Germany:*snuggles with Kitsune*
(Q.Q I wish that the He talks characters were real now.... THE FEELS MAN! THE FEELS!!!!!! T.T)
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KatDawgAdopts Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
Prussia go away ;-;
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Insanity-Kitsune Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  New member
Prussia:nu!! *video taping*
Me:*walks in and kicks Prussia to the moon* IF YOU EVER RUIN THE MOOD AGAIN, YOU'LL NEVER BE ABLE TO HAVE KIDS WHEN YOU GET MARRIED!!!! =n=*walks outta the room*
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KatDawgAdopts Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
:la:
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:iconinsanity-kitsune:
Insanity-Kitsune Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  New member
:D
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Rj223 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014
Omg... So frickin cute!!
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Sushi-Cutie Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You don't have to put a 'v' in place of every 'w'. Don't do it at the end of words. You also emphasized some words in the wrong places. Like 'UND zhen' should be 'und ZHEN'. It was very good besides the grammatical errors, though.^^
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MissSilverSonicBases Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
10/10
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AlbinoCyndaquil Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww, such fluff. much adorbs. wow. :iconblushplz: :meow:
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Lforeverisa Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
Awwwww this story is so fluffy!!!! But if I were the girl, I would not only cuddle Luddy! I would grab Gilbert, Ivan, Matthew, Lukas and Alfie for the group hug
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TenderAbsynth Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Kawaii Eyes) [V6] This is simply adorable~ Aww, Ludwig, I always knew you were the cuddling type ^_^
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you~
And yes, he should be. i think he doesn't show that side of him unless it's alone (*wiggles eyebrows suggestively*) and with a loved one.
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Fudgenuggets. I meant AWWW DOITSU
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Student Writer
XD You can't resist that sexy German~
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
HUUUUUWAH YES
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Student Writer
XD
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FaethS Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
Nyuuuuuuu... =w=

I love fics like this where the usually stern character isn't scared of showing a softer side to him to a certain someone.
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Student Writer
Yeah, but they're hard to find` Especially ones where they just have a relaxing time instead of love confessions.
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FaethS Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
Yeah.  As amazing as those love confessions can feel, it's nice to have something more calming like this.
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student Writer
Yep~
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spiritofterrabithia Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student General Artist
I love this. If this really did happen just  as a joke I'd start doing Prussia's laugh while Doitsu and I were cuddling.
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student Writer
pfft. XD
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spiritofterrabithia Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student General Artist
I did recently master his laugh so it would work out.
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student Writer
I'm trying to master France's laugh. XD
I pretty much got down Spain's.
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spiritofterrabithia Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student General Artist
I can't do Spain's laugh. France and Prussia I've go down but not Spain! I can roleplay as all of them pretty well according to my friends. ( I don't know how I even get France I'm nothing like him ) 
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student Writer
It's not that fluent, but I think it's the easiest. XD France's is pretty hard for me. Besides, France and Prussia happen to be two of the easiest Hetalia characters I can write and roleplay. Or England and America. XD
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spiritofterrabithia Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student General Artist
My friends say that I'm a boss at being England ( I am british so its not that hard ) I'm told I'm like his twin since I have dirty blonde hair and green eyes. They are really easy to write and roleplay as. 
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Student Writer
Cool~ My friend says I act more like Spain, even though I'm American. I do kinda have the same hair colour as him, but not eye colour. ;_;
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megatejja Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
D'awww:3
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braveheart290 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
I love this! especially the Prussia part xD
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student Writer
Glad you loved it~! ^^
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sarahsmiles16 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Student Writer
Cutte!!!!!!
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Student Writer
Really? Thanks~ I'm glad you liked it!
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sarahsmiles16 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Student Writer
yes and im glad you wrote it
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Wolf-Fangs73371 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, cute! Reader-chan sure is persistent.
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Student Writer
Oui, she is~ XD
Thanks and glad you liked! <3
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kiratheotaku Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014
So cute!!!!!!!! There isn't nearly enough cuddling fanfiction. You've made me a very happy fangirl!
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student Writer
Heh, glad you liked it~
And yes, there isn't enough cuddling fanfictions. That's why I wanted to make one, just some simple cuddling that can make a person (or more) happy. ^w^
And I'm glad I accomplished that.
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TheStoryHunter Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Adorable~!!! *sparkling eyes* Doitsu's fan! *brofist* Oh, and Germany won the world cup epic-ly! :dummy:
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Student Writer
:iconskrillexbrofistplz: Glad you liked!
And omg, yessssss~ :iconsuperw00tplz:
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RockGothPrincess Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student General Artist
It's an adorable story :), and somehow reminds me of my brother XD (he likes to cuddle)
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student Writer
Glad you liked!
Heh, coincidences happen! XD
(Pfft, I'm the cuddler of my family. Like, I tend to cuddle whatever i can get my hands on while I sleep, whether it be my cat or one of my pillows. ;w; )
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RockGothPrincess Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student General Artist
I do like to cuddle too, but the pillow or plush toy next to me (i have a panda :3) ends up on the floor the next morning XD
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ShadowRealm666 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student Writer
XD Mine never does. I just end up waking up, and my cat or pillow's basically squeezed or (in the case of the cat) glaring at me at the other end of my bed. Sometimes i think my cat hates me. ;-;
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LinsaSake Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
I'm surprised Germany didn't make a comment about how Reader-chan's pestering was like Italy's~ :)
I don't think I could say constructive criticism about this...sorry :( It's just too adorable and fluffy and sweet~ And, adding the Prussian in there was awesome  too!
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Insanity-Kitsune Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  New member
IKR??
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